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De Arimasu 6

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Keroro Gunso
The fallen star finds an enemy… de arimasu!

It had been extremely unproductive that day. Minutes felt like hours. Hours felt like days. If an idea ever came up, it was flawed. Tamama dreaded the counter; they had reached single digits. A week and two days. That was all they had. With that deadline, could anything be accomplished?
Keroro stood up in front of the nine in the Hinata's den.
"Look, I know there's a lot of stress right now," he began, "But we've got to get an idea of what we can do. Can we run through some ideas?"
"Selling Rainbows," Hikiki piped up.
"Selling what...?" Giroro asked.
"Rainbows. They're really popular shoes," Hikiki said.
"America's got bad economy right now," Kururu said.
"Who's talking about America? We're in Japan," Hikiki protested.
"We're home," Fuyuki said, coming through the doors with Natsumi and Masaru trailing behind him.
"Hi, Fuyuki-dono," Keroro grinned.
"What are you guys doing? Up to no good again?" Natsumi asked.
"Actually, we were discussing an invasion plan," Nozizi said with a cute smile.
"Same difference," Natsumi said.
"What do you think about Hiki-chan's idea: selling Rainbows?" Keroro asked.
"Rainbows huh? That doesn't sound so bad. You aren't messing with them are you?" Natsumi asked. Everyone looked at Kururu. He grinned.
"Kukuku...~ Why are you all looking at me?" he smiled innocently.
"Gee, I wonder," Tamama said.
"Have you come up with anything else?" Masaru asked.
"No. Why, was the Rainbow idea really that bad...?" Hikiki asked.
"Well, you guys seem to focus a lot on merchindising copyrighted items. You might switch it up a little," Fuyuki said.
"Good point, but we're getting kinda desperate in case you haven't noticed," Keroro said.
"You could try something based on the news," Masaru said.
"Masaru, don't encourage them," Natsumi muttered.
"It's not a great idea. I just wanted to help," Masaru protested.
"You wanted to help take over Earth?"
"...well... when you put it like that..."
"No, it's not a bad idea!" Keroro said quickly, "What kind of news did you have in mind?"
"I dunno. Kururu and Hikiki could invent something helpful to the world or you could disguise as Pekoponians and make your mark on the world. Do something like break a world record or something entertaining... there's always posing as celebreties..."
"Masaru! No!" Natsumi barked. Masaru and Raido both cowered a little at her snap.
"Sorry, sorry..." Masaru murmured.
"Speaking of celebreties, did you hear that Mutsumi-san is going to make an appearance on the News tonight?" Fuyuki asked.
"OH MY GOD!" Natsumi, Hikiki, and Raido screamed at once.
"...Hikiki...? You like 623's show?" Kururu asked.
"Why not? I like his voice! He's really cool," Hikiki said sheepishly.
"Raido likes him too?" Natsumi asked, "I guess there's something we have in common!"
"No, I mean, did you see that?!" Raido exclaimed pointing at the window.
"See what?" Dororo asked.
"This big... thing! It just... fell out of the sky!" Raido stammered.
"Are you feeling okay...? Is Pekopon's atmosphere getting you ill?" Keroro asked, putting his hand on Raido's forehead. Both blushed awkwardly, and Raido shoved it off.
"Knock it off! I'm serious!" he snapped.
"Alright, alright, take it easy, guys," Natsumi said, going to the window, "I'm sure it was just a bird or a- What the heck?!"
"See...? When I say something, it doesn't mean squat to anyone else," Raido muttered.
"Mumbler," Daikiki said. Raido threw him a dirty look.
Natsumi walked to the door and went outside. Keroro immediately followed. Tamama followed him and Raido followed as well. The others remained stationary.
When they got outside, Tamama took notice to a creature that was slightly larger than himself sprawled out on the grass in front of the house. She wore a black and grey layered shirt and blue jeans. She had dark blue hair and light blue fur that covered her body. She had rabbit ears and a fox tail.
Keroro and Raido looked at the girl as she lay on the grass.
“Where did she come from…?” Fuyuki asked.
“She’s not an Angol is she?” Tamama asked.
“Nah, there’s no way… she's too furry,” Keroro said. He picked up a stick and poked her with it. The girl woke up instantly and started laughing.
“HAHA! That tickles!” she laughed.
“Wow, that was easy…” Masaru blinked.
“Hey, are you okay?” Natsumi asked. The girl sat up and blinked.
“Um… I think so,” she replied with a grin, “Where am I?”
“This is Pekopon,” Keroro said. The girl looked at Keroro and her eyes widened.
“YOU’RE A KERONIAN!” she squealed, throwing her arms around him.
“Whoa, whoa, whoa!” Tamama spat, “Back off, kid!” The girl let Keroro go and hugged Tamama.
“You guys are the coolest! I’m so glad to finally meet some Keronians in person!” she said.
“So you know about us, huh?” Raido asked, “What’s your name?” The girl got quiet. She rubbed the back of her head.
“I don’t really know…” she said.
“How don’t you know your own name?!” Natsumi asked.
“Well, I’ve got a lot of names…” the girl replied, “I don’t have any one specific.”
“That makes sense…” Keroro said.
“How?” Fuyuki asked.
“She’s a Bloomacian of some sort,” he replied.
“A what…?” Masaru asked.
“Bloomacian. They’re a group of aliens who aren’t much for invading, but it’s said that some of them are species shifters,” Raido replied, “Looks like she’s taken her true form.”
“You caught me!” the girl smiled, “But I’m not staying like this for long. Now that I’ve finally seen a Keronian, I’m taking a new form!” She put her arms up in the air and flashed white. Before they knew it, she had transformed herself into a Keronian. She was a light blue tadpole with a hat like Keroro’s. Her tail was shaped like a star. Her symbol was a single red sparkle.
“With a new species, comes a new name!” she smiled, “Starara, desu!”
“Starara?” Masaru repeated.
“Okay, that’s fine,” Keroro said. Starara suddenly began sniffing the air.
“Alright, this kid’s getting freakier by the minute; why are we still hanging around here?” Tamama asked.
Starara got up and went over to a group of bushes. She poked her head in.
“I thought I smelled a Keronian!” she smiled.
“What?” Raido asked. The girl dragged out another familiar tadpole from the bushes.
“HEY! WHAT ARE YOU DOING? STOP! LEAVE ME ALONE!” Tororo screamed.
“Tororo? What are you doing here?!” Raido demanded angrily.
“None of your business!” Tororo barked.
“Actually, it is,” Fuyuki said, “You’re hiding out in our yard.”
“Shut up, you stupid Pekoponian!” Tororo hissed. Starara hugged him and snuggled her cheek against his.
“He’s so incredibly cute!” she cooed. Tororo tried to push her off.
“Ugh! Get off, weird girl!”
“If you tell them what you’re doing here, I will!” Starara squeaked.
“Okay, okay, okay! I kinda got left behind when we were fighting last time and so I’ve been trying to spy on you queeroes’ meetings to be able to tell the rest of the Platoon when they come back for me. Of course, I should’ve known that I wouldn’t be learning anything from you idiots! Now let go!” Tororo shouted, shoving Starara off.
“So, you’re alone, huh?” Natsumi asked.
“I suppose we could keep you as a prisoner of war,” Keroro said.
“What?!” Starara exclaimed, “No! You can’t!”
“Starara, you don’t know this guy. He’s as cold as ice,” Tamama hissed. Starara began to cry.
“Dude? Is she crying?” Tororo asked, apparently getting freaked out as well.
“But you can’t just cage him up like a bird!” she sobbed.
“Hey, who said anything about cages? We’re just going to shove him in a bubble that physically disables him-” Keroro started. Raido nudged him.
“Gunso, that doesn’t help,” he sweatdropped. Starara began sobbing harder.
“You guys are so mean! How could you be so heartless?!” she bawled.
“W-what is your problem…?” Tororo asked, sweatdropping.
“Please don’t lock him up! Let me take him! I’ll take very good care of him!” Starara insisted. Tororo gazed at her strangely.
“Wait- what?” he asked.
“Are… are you sure you want to do that?” Raido asked.
“Absolutely!” Starara exclaimed.
“No! No, please! I-I’ll take my punishment in a bubble!” Tororo panicked. Tamama exchanged glances with Raido and Keroro.
“Hm… if it bothers you so much…” Keroro started, “Starara, he’s all yours.”
“Really? You mean it?! Oh, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, THANK YOU!” Starara squealed. She glomped Tororo, “I swear we’ll be the bestest friends ever! I promise to be a very good friend to you, Tororo-kun!”
“No! This isn’t fair! Why? Why?!” Tororo whined.
“No, no. I think I’ll enjoy this very much,” Keroro smiled.
“See you later! …you two,” Tamama grinned.
The incident didn't affect them this time. But the plans weren't going well. It wasn't until the next day that Keroro finally got an idea. It started from the note on the kitchen table.

Eight days remain.
Super duper short and semi-pointless chapter, but it serves a point later, and the introduction of Starara.

...I felt like this was bad. But at least now I can put more time into chapter 7, which I got an idea for in Atlanta and it supports several pairings at once.

EDIT: Eh, after three years, I'm renaming my species. Melmac is a copyrighted name (Alf) so... to make it a little easier, I'm a Bloomacian. ...it took me hours to come up with that! D8 (jkjk)
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Chii-Bii's avatar
I've read this fan fiction over and over.

I can't really say anything good about it.

I'm not trying to be mean, I'm trying to be realistic.

Total Mary-Sues in this fic.

I hate Hakiki.

She's a total Mary-Sue. Which are things fan fiction writers should AVOID while making OCS

Please, for the love of god. USE SPACING IN BETWEEN SENTENCES!!!

That made this fan fiction extremely hard to read and understand.

The only thing good I can say about it, is the whole

Radio is gay for Keroro thing, that actually made me laugh the first time I read it. :3

But other than that, it needs a LOT of work.

The characters are way out of character which just makes it annoying.

I'm not being too harsh. I'm being realistic.